Sunday 5 April 2009

Now... let us head for the second part!!!

Great! I am glad all 5 of you did manage to post your answer to the question I posed on you. Now, have a new look at what your mates wrote and give your opinion. Do you agree with everyone else? Do you disagree with a specific idea? Is there any correction (language, organisation, content, etc) you'd like to make? Go ahead and shoot!
DD

1 comment:

  1. I agree with most of what is said. I think that the setting is not as important for the message of the story as are the comments given by the author throughout the story, and I disagree with a statement that points out that the story shows how time does not affect our feelings (I would change the word feelings for a more objective and specific word). I also disagree with the statement about time not affecting our concept of reality, since I believe that REALITY and TIME are tied in a symbiotic pattern. For example, our present is our reality, which is quite different than that of 40 years ago, in a different time, so time does affect reality because they evolve hand in hand for change.

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